I was literally walking at 3:23 in the day, then suddenly it went dark… and all I could see was this monster, slowly, slowly walking towards me. Probably trying to kill me. I was scared. Really, really scared. This place is creepy. I can’t find the way out.
“Help! Help!” I scream.
“Where am I?!” I yell. “Help,” I was really panicking now. The monster was right behind me. I could feel it’s cold breath on the back of my neck.
I was huffing and puffing. My breath was getting scarce. I was really tired. The monster it’s-
All a dream.
“The Sibartinan Sasquatch is the biggest living myth alive,” said Ms. Green.
“Wow. Those footprints are huge!” I said.
“The biggest in the world,” Ms. Green said.
“Wow. I’d like to meet big foot one day,” I said.
“He is quite dangerous,” said Ms. Green. “No one hunts them because they are scared. They eat humans alive,”
We get on the bus and go home from the excursion. I was really excited to tell my parents all that I know.
While we were driving there, we saw more footprints. And alot of fur and a-
“Sasquatch!!!” Everyone screamed.
5 BIG QUESTIONS-The lady in blue
Question 1: What makes this book/story good?
I think the twist at the end makes the story really intriguing and good to read.
And I also think that the show not tell makes the story really good.
Question 2: What would make this book/story better?
I think it would be better if the girl told her that she was her mum.
I think it’s a really good story, the link is here for more details.
I can use the 5 BIG QUESTIONS with ‘The Lady in Blue’
I’m getting a new dog today! I have been wanting one for 3 years. But I’m getting a pomeranian chihuahua. I’m going to name it Chi Chi. When I came home from school that day I was disappointed. Where’s the dog? I was meant to get it today. I waited for weeks and weeks. The dog just never came. One morning, though, a bright sunny morning, I found something out. My dog was meant to come today. The date was wrong. I was so happy. As it came rushing towards me that day, it was the greatest day of my life.
I lay there, on my scarlet cushion. The soft fabric tickled my face. Nothing could ruin this moment. Zzzzzzzzzzzzz…
“AAAAAAHHH!” yelled my annoying little brother.
“What?” I yell.
“There’s a fire! OK, I’ll tell you what happened. I had watered the plants and I was having a play outside, then, I spotted the violin mum bought you for christmas and wanted to play it. So I got, but I accidently broke the string, so I felt guilty and lit it on fire. But the fire got too big!” he said.
“I am going to-” I started.
“Fire!” Someone screamed.
I’m going to 711. You know why? I’m going to get a lime slurpee. They’re my favorite. Need to get home, the clock says 5:30. I walked out with my slurpee, and of course, the bully is here to humiliate me.
“Hey, dirty rat, drinkin’ another snot slurpee, huh?” he jeered. His gang let out a laugh.
“You’re the only rat I see here,” I said. “Somebody call the fire department, because you just got burned!” I laughed and walked past him.
He really goes overboard . I excitedly ran home ready to tell mum and dad that I finally dealt with the bully.
My goal is to try to not get over 100 words.
This is awesome! I love the fair, it happens every year. My favourite ride is the merry go round. I always get fairy floss, go on the bouncy castle then go on the merry go round. I am now going to get fairy floss! It’s the best, right? It sweet and sticky, it’s just really great. After my snack I go straight to the bouncy castle. I really have fun on that, because, out of all my friends I bounce highest. I’m going to my favourite ride now. But the horses are gone! Geez what a great day it’s been!
I was in the kitchen, washing my hands, the water from the tap just came out. The water just kept gushing out and it would not stop. This is how it happened.
Me and my brother were kicking a soccer ball around in the kitchen, and it kept hitting the sink. I don’t know what we were thinking but we just kept going. Soon, the tap snapped right off, and our whole house was completely flooded. That is why we are bending down, on our knees, wiping up all drenched pieces of furniture and other house items. Worst day ever!!!
15 Kilometres from Sydney, is what they call ‘dragon territory’. If you jump in, you can see the weedy sea dragons. They are interesting little creatures that float around amongst the seaweed. They are native to Australia and they are related to the sea horse. They can be found in the waters mostly off the east and south coast. They drift around in the water and they blend in with the kelp and seaweed. But, they are becoming harder and harder to find, and not just because of their good hiding skills. They used to be quite common on the north side of Sydney, but now they are not common at all. If you’re lucky, you can see one, but sometimes, you don’t see any. Instead of catching them and tagging them, all of the ones that are found, they are asking the finders to take pictures of them and send them in. They are using special software to look at the special, unique patterns on their bodies. They give them names every time they get a new pattern. Weedy sea dragons are classified as near threatened. But scientists think that this research could provide enough information to get them listed as endangered. They think that climate change is part of the problem. The rising temperatures kill the kelp, and it leaves them homeless.
It’s quiet. Too quiet. I creep up to Mum and Dad’s room to see if they’re there. They are, but they aren’t moving. I tap Dad on the back.
He doesn’t budge. I go back to my room. Weird. I keep reading my book. It’s called the ‘Storm Keepers’, and it’s a really good book. It explains a lot about flashes of lightning and thunderstorms. “…in the flash of lightning I saw… ” I read.
As I read that, a huge flash of lightning zapped through my room. In the white light, I could see…My cat??!! Tiddles!!!
“What are you doing?”